This was okay. Personally I'm not really a fan of the art-style and I thought the animation was kinda janky at times, but I did like the backgrounds and overall atmosphere, it had somewhat of a unique charm to it. I thought the music was really nice too. As for the writing and humor I didn't think it was that great. The plot was very basic and didn't really have anything interesting going on, and there isn't anything wrong with a simple plot as long as the jokes are good, but I didn't find much of it that funny. The outburst near the end was a little funny, but even then I think it would've worked better if there was more build-up, rather than coming out of nowhere. You've got potential, but I think your stuff could definitely be improved in a lot of areas