It's alright but quite frankly it's got nothing on the Angry Birds reanimate collab
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It's alright but quite frankly it's got nothing on the Angry Birds reanimate collab
Pretty great! Really nice animation and posing, lotta energy in the visuals throughout. I feel the story coulda been more fleshed out, the ending in particular felt pretty underwhelming. I think the high energy action scenes would've benefited from more fitting music, or even just giving the music more presence, the track felt kinda distant from the action going on and didn't really add a whole lot. Really good all around tho, with more developed stories and better audio, you could have sum real incredible stuff here!
Pretty fun! Cool to see how you've evolved, I like this aesthetic you've developed over time. Animation is real solid, consistently high energy and fun. I also dig the more surreal visuals with the weird 3d n everything.
Fred's voice is an improvement for sure, the character in general is more likeable than in the last short you did. Personally I thought he was kinda overly sarcastic and sassy in that short, didn't have much charisma or any real funny element to him, he was just kinda annoying. He works better here where he's still sorta the straight man, but not just making basic snarky remarks all the time.
I will say I'm not a fan of Eric's voice, he barely speaks so it's not really an issue here, but I do think his voice and how he skips certain words is kind of a typical "stupid cartoon voice" if that makes sense. Not really any charisma or charm to it, just sounds like the first thing that came to mind when thinking "stupid voice". I'd try to develop it further.
In terms of humor I do think it's a bit basic, some funny visuals but not a whole lot beyond pretty simple slapstick. Not against slapstick at all, I think a lot of golden age cartoons are great, but I think they also have a lot of other inventive funny ideas and jokes that add to the physical comedy, there was a bit of that here but not a whole lot. Would be a good idea to play up the more surreal elements going forward, I think that's where the creativity of the series shines the most.
Pretty good first ep, you got solid groundwork to really push yourself to do more out there stuff, keep at it Trusty!
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if i have to hear about fulpware one more time i'm flying down to australia and committing mass genocide. every last hungry jack's will be burned to the goddamn ground mark my fucking words
do it u fucking coward
i have not played a second of this but censoring minorities' freedom of artistic expression is fucked!!! these ppl prolly support Boondocks being censored too...
thank you for understanding, i'm sick and tired of blancos telling me what I should or shouldn't make. This is MY oppression, this is MY discrimination, and I'M allowed to make fun of it.
Really enjoyed this! There's a lot of personality to it and there's some really good jokes. I think there could've been opportunities to have the story go off in different directions, since from playing through this a couple times, it doesn't seem like the choices change anything later on or really impact the story as a whole. I could be wrong as I haven't explored every choice, but I think even for just a couple playthroughs there should be more variation to really keep it interesting. I had fun with it overall tho, looking forward to seeing anything else u guys make
most hyperspecific shit ever i love it lmao
lol wow haven't seen this before, ty!
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed this!
ur style works rly well for gritty weird shit like this. i do think the colors for the shadows could be more interesting, they look a bit bland
Yeah I didn't have much for a color scheme in mind while drawing this even less when doing the background so I was kinda winging it, still happy with how it turned out I can totally see what you mean. Looking at it now probably would have been easy to use some intese reds on this 😮
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